Someone help me please!!! Is this sentence right?? " Sacagawea's family trusted Lewis and Clark that they gave up their baby to them to be raised in such a manner as he thought proper." If it's not correct please fix it. Thank You! (sorry for my bad English)
I think overall its pretty good, if you wanted to change it you could say. "Sacagawea's family trusted Lewis and Clark enough that they handed over their baby to be raised in a manner they thought would be proper."
Here is my version of the sentence if it helps,"Sacagawea's family trusted Lewis and Clark who they gave up their baby to be raised in such a manner as he thought was proper."
